Just Finished…The Tower by Jade Varden

Synopsis: Death brings some families closer, but it’s ripped mine apart. I wanted to convince the police that they had the wrong suspect…but I never expected them to start suspecting me. Now, I have no choice but to keep searching for the truth, even if all my relationships fall to pieces around me.

Someone is trying to make me look guilty. I never thought my mission to prove my own innocence would lead me to more family secrets. I thought I had already discovered the truth about myself. But every answer raises more questions, and everything I think I know is about to change…again.

I have to find the truth, no matter how much it hurts — before I get charged with murder.

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When I read Justice, the first book in Jade Varden’s Deck of Lies series, earlier this year I was looking forward to the release of the follow-up book The Tower after being left with a doozy of a cliff-hanger. You can read my review of Justice at Aside from Writing blog.

So…after the wait, did The Tower deliver? Absolutely! 🙂 I stayed up reading with one eye it was that good!

Normally I struggle with “Second-Book-Syndrome” – I love the first then find the second one less than satisfying (Twilight, The Hunger Games, Hush Hush series and Darkest Powers series all had this for me) – with The Tower I actually liked it better than Justice and would agree with the idea that you could read this book without having read the first. Although the characters and story continues from the first book, The Tower is written in a way that also allows it to work as a stand-alone book, which I think is great.

It is a difficult book to review without giving spoilers, but I’ll try…in contrast to Justice which focuses on the mystery surrounding the kidnapping of a baby girl and her subsequent reuniting with her real family over a decade later, The Tower is more a murder mystery. It reminded me a little of the Point Horror books I used to love when I read young adult fiction the first time around, where someone in the middle of the action needs to solve the riddles the police cannot, although it is written with much more depth and sophistication. There are plenty of twists and turns to keep the reader guessing and another good cliffhanger to seal the end of the book. I liked the epilogue particularly in how it drew the themes of the story back to the symbol of the tarot card ‘the tower’ – very neatly done.

Overall, I’d say 4.5* for me – it was practically perfect – I did get a little lost in twists in the middle (just like Rain I wanted paper to map them out) and missed a character who featured heavily in Justice, but it was great seeing Sawyer  in more depth and I liked the relationship between him and Rain as they work through the mystery. Jade has a really good writing style: well-described, interesting and believable characters, who work well in the events of the novel. I absolutely have my suspicions as to who has done what…but I’ll need to read the next book to find out! So I’m looking forward to the next instalment.

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So – do you think this sounds good? Well – the author has kindly provided me with ebooks of her books so that one lucky reader could win both Justice and The Tower to read for themselves. The competition starts tomorrow and you’ll have a week to enter, so visit my main website and ‘like’ this review or follow on Twitter and get yourself in it to win it! 

Enter Competition at http://cusick-jones.com/giveaway.php

Song on Sunday – 1

A Song On Sunday is an original meme hosted by Emily at Confessions Of A Bookaholic. It’s simple to join in all you have to do is:

1. Pick a song that you loved this week
2. Match it with a book
3. Grab the button
4. Link back to Emily and leave a link so she can see your post

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So for my first Song on Sunday I’ve chosen…

Real Hero by College and Electric Youth – taken from the soundtrack of Drive – I saw the film a few weeks ago but this song has really stuck with me. The book I match it with is my own WIP The Rainbow Maker’s Tale , which is Balik’s story…anyone who knows Hope’s Daughter will probably see why this reminds me of him and I’ve been listening to it while I’ve been writing this week. So – take a listen 🙂

TGIF Look Back – 6th April

Welcome to TGIF Look Back it just takes a few minutes: to play along, just answer the following questions with some Friday feeling…do one or all, whatever you feel like because it’s Friday 🙂

FUNNY – What made you laugh this week?

READING – What were you reading this week?

INSPIRED – What inspired you this week? 

DREAM – What were you dreaming about this week?

ANGEL – Who was your angel/star of the week?

YUCK – What made you go ‘ewwww’ this week?
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My TGIF Look Back…

FUNNY – I’ve never had an iPhone and so I’d not really come across the whole ‘auto correct’ thing until recently when we got an iPad. This week when I got a message from a work colleague telling me “I’ve eaten the knickers off the shelf in the office – sorry!” I did have to wonder where the underwear had come from, why he would have eaten them and finally – why would he tell me about it? Auto correct was not my first thought, but was obviously his when I received a follow-up text confirming it was my SNICKERS he’d eaten and not some random pants…anyway, after having a good giggle at this I went in search of more inspiring auto corrects and found some very funny ones – enjoy!

http://www.damnyouautocorrect.com/category/best-of-dyac/

http://www.damnyouautocorrect.com/13603/the-25-funniest-autocorrects-of-dyacs-first-year/

READING – Have read quite a lot this week – two books and reviews over the weekend (Bites and Alice Parker’s Metamorphosis) and am currently reading Shadowland by CM Gray.

INSPIRED – After watching Contagion on Sunday night, I was inspired to update our zombie/apocalypse – don’t worry – it’s not real, just a silly conversation a friend and I had one afternoon when avoiding work last year – but our ‘fictional’ plan needed updating and we definitely need to make friends with some people who have actual skills other than writing and sarcasm, otherwise I think we’ll be zombie-fodder.

DREAM – Nope – just sleeping 🙂

ANGEL – Angel / stars of the week for me are the lovely bloggers who accepted Hope’s Daughter for reading/reviewing this week. Hope you enjoy it!

YUCK – Quiet week on the ‘eeewww’ stuff – can’t think of anything…
Happy holidays to everyone off over the bank holiday weekend – not too much chocolate 🙂

To be or not to be? Some thoughts on publishing…

I started thinking about this after writing a lengthy answer to a question posted on a Goodreads forum. The question asked was: “How did you get published?”

In this day and age, where e-publishing has completely opened up the options and opportunities for writers, the question should probably be “how did you choose to publish?” – that’s what I answered at least 🙂 Because now you don’t have to wait on impressing a single publisher or agent that your work is worthy of consideration – we’ve all heard the rejection stories of Stephenie Meyer and J K Rowling – you can simply choose to go it alone. Doing this might sound easy, less effort even, but don’t be fooled! lol Anyway, so this is really my thoughts on self-publishing.

Firstly, I would agree whole-heartedly with the people out there who will tell you that if you are thinking of taking this option, you need to draft your work through several versions and take the time to edit, edit then edit some more to ensure you’re happy it’s the best it can be before putting it ‘out there’. If you can find honest friends, family or beta readers to help you, then do that too – feedback will only make your writing better and can help you focus on areas that readers are interested in – you might not always see them when you’re ‘in the zone’ writing a draft. Like I said before, publishing isn’t what it once was… you can self-publish easily and relatively cheaply (promotion is tough though), where that was not really an option before ebooks.

I published Hope’s Daughter myself because:

I’m really impatient and didn’t do well with the traditional agent/publishing route. What I’d do is get a piece ready, send it away, wait X months and when it came back as a negative would begin something completely different thinking “well if they didn’t like this, maybe they like this” (hence I’ve done several books before Hope’s Daughter). I think I’d sent one proposal to three places and Hope’s Daughter to one, before I decided to go the indie route – and that took me five years because of what I did in between.

My sister works in product design and marketing and she agreed that it can be SO subjective whether somewhere takes on a product (book) or not. You’ve got to get the individual liking it and then also from a business perspective it must fit with what their organisation is doing at that point in time – that’s a lot of considerations and a ‘business’ approach for a book. And look at some of the dross publishers do put out, simply because they want to replicate Twilight or another success story! So…it isn’t always about the quality or readability of book that gets it published.

Personally – this wasn’t what I needed. Of course I’d love to hold a ‘real’ copy of my book in my hands or see it on the shelf in a shop – but the ‘virtual’ world bookshelves aren’t much less exciting. Your first good reviews are no less wonderful because someone’s read your book on a kindle and not in hardcover.

Creative writing is something I do when I’m not working and so it didn’t have to pay the bills. If that’s what you’re aiming for I wish you luck – I’ve read that only 5% of authors make a living doing solely that! For me, I write as a hobby, because I enjoy doing it – obviously would love to do it all day everyday, but that’s up there with lottery wins and meeting Joe Manganiello. I was happy with Hope’s Daughter, and having written two previous novels and not done anything with them except file them on my laptop, this time I decided to take action! 🙂 I put Hope’s Daughter out there, mainly because I wanted to get wider feedback on the book beyond my local readers and also, I’d written it so ‘why not’? It wasn’t doing anything sat inside the laptop after all.

And I suppose – from the occasional self-pub success story you see – if you are good, sometimes generating your own readers can demonstrate to publishers that you are viable as an author…without having to wade through dozens of slush piles to show them (also another long shot – but it does happen).

Hope’s Daughter had been through five full MS edits as well as numerous localised ones – so I was happy with the story. Four pre-readers had gone through it and given me feed back. I’d read it so many times I could probably recite scenes from memory – so I did it!

If you are going self-pub, make sure you’re ready to market – ideally before the release of the book – as you can get REALLY bogged down in the writing/publishing side to organise this properly. One of the best prepared launches I’ve seen this year was Marie Landry for Blue Sky Days – she used her network of blogger friends to ensure there was excitement for the book before release and then a very strong blog tour starting immediately after. Plus – it’s a good book! 🙂

Also – couple of good places to hone your skills – try Miss Lits (I’ve seen them on facebook) – you get to write short or full stories, everyone reads, reviews, etc. and you get constructive feedback, which like any author will tell you: you can work on it. Also – goodreads groups often have writing areas which you’ll get support and feedback on for your stuff so try there.

Phew – sorry – I got on a bit of a roll there – but hopefully it’s a little helpful for anyone thinking about doing this and not just waffle 🙂 Basically, if you love writing – do it! Get the feedback, take it on board and practice. And when you’re really happy, try whichever route you want to go and works best for you – go to traditional publishers, release on Amazon or simply post your story on your own blog – whatever works for you, you should do.

Mel x

WWW Wednesday – 2

WWW Wednesdays is a weekly meme hosted over at Should Be Reading – swing by there if you want to join in…Anyway – back to WWW Wednesday…it just takes a few minutes: to play along, just answer the following three questions…

What are you currently reading?

What did you recently finish reading?

What do you think you’ll read next?
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What are you currently reading?
I am about 10% into Shadowland by CM Gray – loving the olde worlde Aurthurian-style setting and its really well written. The only thing I find odd about Kindle reading is saying things like ‘I’m 10% in rather than – on page 94’ 🙂
What did you recently finish reading?
I read Bites by Ninfa Hayes this weekend and Alice Parker’s Metamorphosis – both were good, especially liked Demonica short story in Bites. 
What do you think you’ll read next?
Well I’ve started The Passage but ignored it for a week or so now – it’s just so big it’s putting me off! 🙂 Just got The Outsiders through from Amazon for the classic YA read in April on one of the Goodreads groups, so will probably try that.

Just Finished…Alice Parker’s Metamorphosis

Thanks to author Nicola Palmer for providing me a copy of Alice Parker’s Metamorphosis this week. I’ve really enjoyed reading this fun, fantasy story about feisty thirteen-year-old Alice.

This is a really well-written book, perfect for the target ‘middle grade’ audience of 7+, with strong, defined characters who are both funny and believable. The relationships in the story feel genuine, especially between Alice, her brother and best friend. I really enjoyed the early scene-setting at Alice’s school – certainly brought back some memories 🙂 – and once you get the big reveal about Alice’s recent issues, the story transitions to an action-mystery.

Nicola Palmer is a great writer for children and this is a good debut. Alice Parker’s story is well-constructed with interesting twists and turns, great description and enjoyable characters. Overall, I’m sure this will appeal to a range of readers. Rating: 4*

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Thirteen-year-old Alice Parker knows something isn’t right. Aches and pains have started, she hardly sleeps and her craving for fruit is out of control. Suddenly she is top of the class in every subject. Feeling at odds with the world and being bullied by the ‘coven’ at school, Alice can’t take much more. Only when she collapses and experiences a life-changing transformation does she learn why she is different. But with this new identity comes responsibility and Alice isn’t convinced she can rise to the challenge. She just wants to be normal! The fact is she’s anything but.

Forgotten tales of a magical society are catapulted into the daily life of strong, memorable female characters who readers will grow to love. An intriguing blend of realism, suspense and fantasy, a must-read for girls of 7+.

Just Finished…Bites by Ninfa Hayes

I’ve not read any ‘vampire books’ for a while now. Before I started Bites (last night at midnight, finished first thing this morning!) I was thinking to myself “I don’t really do vampire stories” but that’s not true: I read most of Ann Rice’s books, Twilight Saga, all the True Bloods (until about book ten when they got dull), Bram Stoker, dabbled in YA vampires with Blue Bloods, the first House of Night and a couple of not-so-good indie onesand I liked most of them: some I loved, some not so much…and that doesn’t stop at books because I was a Buffy fan (not so much Angel) and have been loving the True Blood TV series. Perhaps I just go through phases of reading and then find myself a little under-awed with a genre after a while?

Anyway, I realised, I do “do vampire stories” – it’s just that I like ones that are written well, have some depth, interesting and/or original ideas… And Bites does 🙂

Bites is actually a novella of two short stories: Demonica and Last of the Blood – one is a more traditional vampire story, the other a semi-demon crossover with a smattering of angelic backstory which I was hooked on by the end of the first page… Both stories read well and quickly – as short stories there is a limited amount of world building (obviously!) but they introduce interesting characters and concepts.

In Bites, Damon is a thoughtful vampire – with shades of Louis, perhaps Angel, Edward and Bill about him – in how he views the existence he has and vampire/human relationships. I liked the POV story-telling from his side and found his rather poetic voice carried me through his story with interest. The resolution the issues of the story fits perfectly with his character. Catherine also really interested me – I think her experiences and perspective would offer a good story.

Demonica was my favourite of the two stories – this was a 5* for me – I loved the origina story aspects of the beginning and found myself drawn in very quickly. Again – good characters – the female lead is a great, strong person, but with believable weaknesses and flaws. The theological basis for the ideas crossing into the author’s own mythology were intriguing and believable – i love this blending of myths and I think what Ninfa sets up here is a good basis for longer novels.

Overall, I think this is a good debut for a new writer, showcasing her skills for writing interesting characters in familiar situations for the genre, but still doing something original with them. Her stregnth definitely lay in Demonica for me as an overall package it appealled more to me….Definitely recommended 🙂

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DEMONICA 
Tonight is the Midwinter Solstice Ball, the most important night in the Daemonic Court’s calendar.

This is the night when new disciples are chosen, when demons come out to play, and all bets are off.

As it happens, tonight is also the night I become Queen.

LAST OF THE BLOOD 
When the sweet scent reaches me I know I have found what I’m looking for. My hands reach out in the darkness to the unaware girl. She’s warm and soft and doesn’t even get to scream before I’m drinking deeply from her, her struggles too feeble to bother me. Only the blood counts.

Irina is about to become Queen of the Daemonic Court and Damon is on the run from his own nature … where will their paths take them?

Two short stories that will seduce you with romance, danger, sensuality … and Vampire bites.

TGIF Look Back – 30th March

Welcome to my first TGIF Look Back it just takes a few minutes: to play along, just answer the following questions with some Friday feeling…

FUNNY – What made you laugh this week?

READING – What were you reading this week?

INSPIRED – What inspired you this week? 

DREAM – What were you dreaming about this week?

ANGEL – Who was your angel of the week?

YUCK – What made you go ‘ewwww’ this week?
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My TGIF Look Back…

FUNNY – Breakfast radio made me laugh a lot this week – to the point that I probably looked rather crazy laughing like a hyena on the way to work 🙂

READING – I’ve done very little reading this week, partly because I’ve been trying to concentrate on doing some writing and also because we’ve been preparing features for a major indie author event in May…So all this leaves me about 30 pages into The Passage…

INSPIRED – I’ve mostly been inspired to buy books this week – there’s been lots of interesting authors coming through our emails at aside from writing I’ve added a load more books to my Kindle TBR pile – so much for clearing it down! 🙂

DREAM – Very mixed, however, there have been lots of steep hills figuring in my dreams in various guises, whether I’m dream-driving or dream-walking…usually means that I’m preoccupied with a difficult decision to make as I find it an uphill struggle.

ANGEL – Angel / star of the week for me is a lovely little boy named Ted, he’s from Manchester and is just five years old. Currently he’s undergoing treatment for leukemia and has been helping a local radio station raise £50k in just one week for children in the same situation. The story of how he and his family have coped with his condition really touched me – there’s a little picture of him from yesterday on my facebook page – needless to say – I’ve sponsored him 🙂

YUCK – Anyone who knows me well will recall I’m not the best around feathery things – I don’t mind birds at a distant but close up with the flapping and everything? Just ewwwwww…Anyway – for work this week I had to go to an area of our building literally swarming with giant seagulls and pigeons – even between me and a pane of glass it gave me the heebie jeebies – that’s like Room 101 for me!

New Weekly Meme – TGIF!

This week I was looking around for some inspiration for a new regular blog post to do…I liked doing the WWW Wednesday hosted by  Should Be Reading and will probably be doing that pretty frequently – although this week I’m still stuck in the middle of The Passage, it’s a HUGE book, so it killed my chances of completing the March reading challenge as well as doing the feature!

Anyway – what will I be doing for my own meme? Well, I liked the idea of looking back at the week gone by and thinking about the good, bad and ugly…so I’ll be launching ‘TGIF Look Back’ and featuring it each week on my blog, there are six different things to think about each week connected to the letters F R I D A Y 🙂  Sounds simple enough, take a look at what my week has been like when I do the first feature tomorrow